Currently, I am in English A Lit and I am working on my written assignment. I was hoping I could get a couple of opinions on how I could improve my essay and if there's something that I'm missing.
I decided to write my essay on Persepolis and how motifs of culture and religion act as a devil and angel on Marjane's shoulders, guiding her through important and notable decisions. I talk about how the two affect Marji when; she decides she wants to be the last prophet, she repeatedly decides to mouth off her teachers and superiors in school, she decides who she wants to befriend and she decides how she wants to dress and present herself to the public.
Once again, any feedback would be greatly appreciated :)