lizz0529
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Fri Oct 12,2018 04:24 PM

I am considering doing a analytical comparison between Agua como Chocolate and Casa de Alba y el significado a la cultura
Any thoughts or opinions to make it better ??



dayapii
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Sat Oct 13,2018 02:20 AM

you should probably specify which culture they influence (specific country)
lizz0529
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Sat Oct 13,2018 07:48 AM

THANK YOU GUYS ! I’m either thinking of these two questions or just to use one of the two works. Please honestly tell me what you think so it can be better. Thanks!

How are the different themes in the novel used to symbolize the reality of the culture and time period struggles in Agua para Chocolate as compared to La Casa de Bernada Alba?

How is symbolism used throughout works Agua para Chocolate as in La Casa de Bernada Alba and their significance to each culture?
dayapii
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Sat Oct 13,2018 11:26 PM

i don’t mean to be nit picky, but here are some improvements that could be made:

1) saying “different themes” is not only broad, but somewhat vague. try and narrow it down to a specific theme. you can easily search up common themes found in works of literature (ex: human nature, justice, individual vs. society). other than that, it’s perfect.

2) as similar to the first piece of advice, be specific to the type of symbolism you’re referring to. also, instead of saying ‘to each culture’ you could say to their respective cultures (to make it sound more academic).

good luck! :)
lizz0529
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Wed Oct 17,2018 08:19 PM

Thanks ! @dayapii

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