aqmxll
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Tue Jan 30,2018 08:26 AM

do you guys think this is a good introduction
aye.bee
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Wed Jan 31,2018 01:55 AM

Introduction for what and what is your RQ?
aqmxll
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Wed Jan 31,2018 01:02 PM

no not for my rq. It's for practice for paper 2. The question was TWE did nationalism contribute to the origins of 20th century wars?
historyhl
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Tue Feb 6,2018 01:24 AM

I honestly feel like it's rather largely superfluous. You don't need to include specific details, so the info from "When World War 2 began" to "but it's also took place in World War 1" is completely unnecessary for an introduction. Remove that, and your intro will be pretty good.

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